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雅思写作:三步带你搞定流程图

雅思写作:三步带你搞定流程图

发布时间:2021-03-24 关键词:雅思写作,流程图
摘要: 虽然说出流程图的概率不算特别大,但中了的同学五味杂陈,没中的同学提心吊胆。流程图很容易被写出来,但是得分不高。今天老师就给大家介绍下雅思小作文——流程图“三部曲”

    虽然说出流程图的概率不算特别大,但中了的同学五味杂陈,没中的同学提心吊胆。流程图很容易被写出来,但是得分不高。今天老师就给大家介绍下雅思小作文——流程图“三部曲”,帮助同学们灵活运用被动语态,提取核心步骤动词,优化步骤的衔接手段,增加语言丰富性,适度联想,学会“适度”增补图形中的语义。

  按照流程图“三部曲”的要求,同学们需要在每个步骤中找出三个问题的答案:

  1.这个步骤用什么动词?2.步骤中涉及到的材料、工具、地点和其他附加条件(如时间、温度、长度等)分别是什么?3.步骤完成后状态发生了什么变化?

  接下来我们利用流程图“三部曲”的方法,来分析一下《剑桥雅思真题8》Test 3小作文:

  You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

  The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

  You should write at least 150 words.

雅思写作,流程图

  什么是“流程图”呢?它需要我们按照图形所示,分步骤进行示意性展现,这样的流程就叫“流程图”。它要求各步骤之间不仅有时间先后的关系,还要关注逻辑上的连贯性。因此,我们在写作时需要确定时间先后,理清楚各步骤之间的逻辑关系。从图像中,我们可以得出个流程图大致可以分为五个步骤:粉碎,混合,加热,再研磨,打包。根据流程图“三部曲”的方法,我们可以得出以下表格:
雅思写作,流程图

  再将“三部曲”的答案,利用逻辑衔接词、从句过渡,并添加上修饰性成分,如介词短语,不定式,我们可以得出整个段落:

  To produce cement, the raw materials, limestone and clay are crushed into powder and then mixed before being heated in a rotating equipment with a heater at the bottom. The heated mixture is ground into even smaller particles ready to be bagged.

  第二个流程图,材料虽然复杂,但是流程相对单一。依照流程图“三部曲”的步骤,我们可以得出第二个正文段落:

  In order to make concrete which is the major material for building purposes, a mixture consisting of cement, water, sand and gravel, a kind of small stones, is needed. Gravel and sand are the two major materials, representing 50% and 25% of the raw substances, while the ratios of cement and water are relatively low (15% and 10% respectively).

  These materials are mixed and rotated in a concrete mixer until the concrete is produced.

  以上是老师给大家带来的雅思流程图“三部曲”,希望能够对大家有所帮助。同学们认真复习,积极备考,祝大家早日取得优异的成绩。